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"Im Doin iight"
  by La-La16
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I'mma Be Aw'ight by Lyric904Lyfe


Im IIGHTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
perfectly fine
to all da haters who thought i was blind
i see ya bitches tryna throw darts at my back
But looka hurr lala aint havin all dat
itz so unnessicary especcially knowin that you'll neva take my place at tha top
you can try ta knock meh off my moutain but ill keep climbin
why waist ya tyme tryna copy
when you can do sumthing else with ya life rather than stalk me
it comes naturally... within me...listen or ignore it there's nothing you can do sweetie
Im jus fine... doin wut i do best
stunnin iz my reflex
i do it without thinking
if you try you can do it to but not betta fa me
i be lala as you know sendin my haters a lil letter of Information
so first thing on my letta will say LALA BOUNCES BACK LIKE A BALL NO WAY YOU CAN MAKE ME FALL SITTIN SO HIGH ON A MOUTAIN ITZ SO TALL CROWN TO DA SIDE LOOKIN LIKE A QUEEN TRY TO IMITATE ME ITZ HARD NA WUT I MEAN?
next i wanna say... THANX FOR MAKIN ME KNOWN NAME ON DA TIP OF YA TONGUE I WALK BY LISTENIN ...LAUGHIN CUZ U MADE ME DA TALK UP IN YA HOME MY MIND BE GONE SO I KEEP STUNNIN WIT OUT KNOWIN IT BUT THANX FOR MAKIN ME AWARE IM SUMTHIN ULL NEVA FORGET
THIRD LEMME SAY ONCE AGAIN IM IIGHT SO YOU CAN STOP WORRYIN...IM STILL LALA IM STILL HERE.. STILL ON MY THRONE... MIND STILL IN GEAR...THE HATERZ KEEP FOLLOWIN ME LIKE " WUT DO WE HAVE HERE? ANOTHA SET OF HATERS?".....

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Date Submitted: Nov 25, 2008 (04:14 PM)
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  Trill
09/28/09 (05:18 PM) 
Your telling the truth though.Folks need 2 worry bout they own.You gon shine no doubt.Good poem.

  Lyric904Lyfe
11/25/08 (08:57 PM) 
yo that was hot sis, keep up the good writes

  WISDOM21
11/25/08 (04:18 PM) 
THIS IS HOTT MA..I LIKE THE LINE STUNNIN IS MY RELFLEX..LOL.. NICE PIECE..MUCH LOVE AND RESPECT

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