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"IM DONE!"
  by TUANE


You believe me or you believe them
Im with you cause I love you
We have been together for 3years
And all 3yrs, you believe your friends ova ya man
You know that they neva liked me and dont want us to be together
Since they are manless, they gonna do everything in their power to break us up

Ive never given you a reason to doubt me
Never treated you wrong
Never disrespected you
Never harmed you
Gave you what you wanted "Most" of tha time
I cooked for you
Wrote you poems and songs for you
Just because thats what I do

But yey, you believe them over me!
Im done trying t convince you that I havent done wrong
But ya know, since you wanna question me about everything that I do
Every move I make
Since you want to believe them over ya man!
Then go and be with them manless females
I fell in love with you 3yrs ago
Thought that we would be together for eva
But I see that you proved me wrong
So go on and live ya life with them other manless females
IM DONE!
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Date Submitted: Jul 03, 2009 (02:41 AM)
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  ReliableLogic
11/12/09 (02:24 PM) 
lol HARD!!! "since they are manless, they gonna do everything in their power to break us up". That summed it up right there. I hate when people that. I favorited this one too. Your too much son lol

  Lexxi
07/21/09 (03:39 PM) 
Im really feeling this one. You portrayed the way u felt so well -expressive. Sad reality but the truth! -Love this one-

  88ELITE88
07/04/09 (03:32 AM) 
this poem was nice it can have a double symbloic meaning to it from wat we hav been talkin about

  Chainz.
07/04/09 (02:14 AM) 
yeah bruh, i hate when friends get in the way of relationships its to much stress for real, i like the feelings n everything you put into this write its good bruh, 10 stars no doubt keep writing forever ~Chainz~

  geel
07/04/09 (01:32 AM) 
enjoyed this write. It's sad when a female choose friends over u but her lose and someone else gain

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