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"Im Fading"
  by Variator


im fading to black
like after the show when people clap and laugh
acting like they give a damn
but cant understand why the demand for cash
and name brands got them sad
paper or plastic bag which would you rather have?
gather and stash sever and slash the price list
and in a life twist it becomes your wrist
is it worth the risk? superfluous merchants of shit
we purchase to get a little lift inhale a little bit
hold the rip in until your head is blitzed
instead of dealing with this im feeling real bliss
while reality sits on the edge of abyss
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Date Submitted: Nov 06, 2009 (01:47 AM)
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  *Jazique*
11/06/09 (04:06 PM) 
hmmm, this is pretty deep, though its short it hits a lot of issues people go through, ut might hide....

  Shanta`
11/06/09 (02:39 AM) 
Loved the title and the topic ....this defined so many thing in society

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