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"I'm Hurt"
by Group: Diamonds & Pearls

I'm tired
For what? He says
I saw you
Doing what? He says
You kno
kno what? He says
Don't play
Play what? He says
Just amit it
i'll amit it you gone crazy. He says
Oh no, you got it twisted
For real, this is what you call bye i'm leaving. He says
Bye, don't let the door hit you on your way out

Date Submitted: Nov 30, 2008 (12:31 AM)

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COMMENTS (2)

Rissa14

11/30/08 (07:48 PM)

real talk. i like how you got the piece al mysterious and not straight up saying what you though. like..i would think on average that he cheated. its like you leave it at the readers hands to figure out whats up. but i really like this piece. nice work. ten stars xoxo ♥RISSA

BlessedOne

11/30/08 (12:40 AM)

So what did he do? Was he with another girl, or was he digging boogers? lol

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