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"I'm In A Sentimental Mood...."
  by Simply_Summer


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Im



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Completely
Utterly in love
Falling
Hopelessly
Terribly
Feening
For his fingers
To run across the pages

Connected
Bound
Penning
Our hearts
As one
He has me
Sprung
Page
After
Remarkable
Page

Im glued

Waiting for the next piece to begin
Watching him
Tentatively think
His muse
Amused
At his wordplay

He has me
My heart
Soul
Bundled into an
Inevitable cocoon
Warmth surrounds
Incubates
These emotions
Oh yes
The blues
Play a lullaby
Professing
Confessing
My sentiments
And yes.

INDEED

Im in a sentimental mood

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Words pour
pages drip
From my lips


HIS PROFESSIONAL PROSE
Pulls
me
Into
PINE-ING

Sweet gently,
Syrupy style
Runs
D
O
W
N
My
Chin
Making
Traces
Of
Steamy
Trails
Setting
INTO
My Belly
I RUB
LONGINGLY
Wanting more
Of his words

Staring at his
PIECE while envisioning
HIS IMAGINATION
I SEE US
WEAVING
WONDERFULLY
WRITTEN
WORDS

WILLINGLY
WAITING
WHILE
WE
WADE
WITH
WANTING

Seductively
Sentimental
Oh yes I am!

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F
E
L
L
I
N
G

A little bit of alright
A smile forms
Side to side
Extending horizontally

He consumes my thoughts
Ecstatically
Elated
Euphoric in nature
My soul calls
Melancholy
Meaningful intentions
Mitigate the justification of this
Emotion
Enveloping my consciousness
Subconsciously
Alleviating the pain
Once felt
Left by ones before

You
yes sentimentally
I can confess
Nights
That I an not entirely asleep
But in an state of enrapture
Being the feeling of
Belonging to something more than
Just pen and pad
Conversing computer screens
Travel on electric currents
Igniting a flame
Deep within

Longingly
Achingly
Wanting you to be near
Sweet
Sentiments.

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Cravingly
Carving
My crazed
Reality
Out of
Responses
And dreams
Combining
Hopelessness
With carefulness

I give him
Words from
My heart
Nonchalantly
Hopefully
HE will
Pass it
Off as
Simple sentiments
Yet my heart
Is heavy
And aching

Whenever
Our meshing
Of pens is
Absent
I sulk in
Sentiments
Of lost
Collabs
Enriching
My desire
Filled with
Angst
knowing
I will never
See his face
Nor hear his
VoiceI
Pretend through prose

I am A
Self-confessed
Shamelessly
Seduced
Sentimentalist

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Sentiments
Expressed vocally
Rhythmical in time
Mentally masturbating
To lines posted

Longing to hear
A word
Spoken from his lips
I imagine being
Soft as velvet
Sweet as honey

He has me torn
Mentally
Vacating
The thoughts
Of others
I believed to
Be on that
Level

Corresponding
Notes
Passed
Through
Poems
Written
Subconsciously
Writing my love
Designated for him
Sentimentally
Sentimental

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Soulful Soliloquies
And Sonnets
Saturate my
Mind
Reconstruct
New views
Forgetting
The time
I read one
And then
Another
Addicted to
His reasoning
And his rhyme

His pen like
A skilled
Shaft
Strokes
Cerebral Cortex
Massages axons
Coursing through
Brains grooves
To remain
Embedded
As sentimental
And sensual
Soldered into
My memory
S
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Date Submitted: Mar 15, 2008 (07:22 AM)
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  Latisae
05/05/08 (04:23 AM) 
Just for the record though, In A Sentimental Mood was sung by Phyllis Hyman, it premiered on Duke Ellington's Sophisticated Ladies, a broadway production, not knockin Ella or anything, just settin the record. Now for the poem, this was great, I've never heard anyone put poetry to this song before so it was pretty beautiful, this is me and my fiance's song so I had high hopes when I saw the poem title, and they were justified!

  Jones
03/16/08 (03:46 AM) 
Y'all ain't foolin' nobody, 'specially not me. This is sex veiled in admiration. Heartbeats thudding in minds, between thighs. Sighs solving nothing but the body's call for breath. Equations complex being carefully comprehended through wordy wizadry. Sentiment moods as sincere seductions play the poem perfectly. Well done, poets. Love and peace.

  .Candice.Renee...
03/15/08 (08:08 PM) 
read this one from my phone and had to make sure i sat down re read it and let you ladies know this was a beautiful collab thats flowed seamlessly. I'm more than just pleased with such a write I'm in awe. Much love you two.

  Speechless Ima...
03/15/08 (05:14 PM) 
loved this collab. wordplay and flow was tight...the overall vibe was on point....yall did well...ten star collab

  Tha Scorpion
03/15/08 (03:56 PM) 
Simply wonderful, this was awesome from the layout, the choices in words, the music, just incredible work you two, bravo!!

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