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"I'm In Love With Your Eloquence"
  by ♥Lique'n Poetic Fluid♥
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There’s something about your voice…
That makes me want to know you more
I want to travel to your soul
So I can lay on your core and be the center of your essence
Because you have me yearning to be apart of you
And I know this may seem strange……
This abstract thinking that I am doing, but I can’t help it
Just…..something about those octaves in your voice
It takes me to a place in my mind where I’m… comfortable
Listening to you speak makes me feel like I’m at home
With those sweat pants on, wearing my fuzzy slippers…
My favorite T-shirt and wrapped up in a blanket on the couch
…. Cozy and at ease, willing to tell you any and everything
Just so I can continue to hear you speak, that is what your voice does to me
And I’m not afraid to say it
When you drop the tone in your voice and say something sexy to me
It is like that midnight massage with oil, surrounded by a million candles
And the ambience is nice because Brian McKnight is crooning in the background
Except…… he is replaced by the rich sounds of your voice
And the tingling sensations from your hands is substituted …
By the vibrations of the sound waves of your vocal chords
…Your voice turns me on…….
The way you speak takes me back to being a girl
All frilly and giggly, like we before we grown….
I want to trade you my Gigapet for your Tomagochi
Give you my pudding cup because I know you like extra sweets at lunch
And wear your letterman jacket like if we were in high school
Sport your name on my back so people will know I am your property
That voice makes me feel so young and….happy
I just love to hear you speak…….
Because your voice makes me want to Embrace You like what Harmony wrote about
And I’m willing to be your Best Friend like that piece that Insatiable.vessel did
The things you say to me makes me feel like Rosey…
I Am Not Afraid…to tell you these things
Your voice makes me happy
Comforts me when I’m sad, puts me at ease when I’m irritated
And makes me wanna do some things on a Late Night Tip like B. Rose
I’m in love with your voice…….
So now you know why I get saddened
When we have to hang up the phone…………….

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Date Submitted: Oct 18, 2008 (09:07 PM)
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  Ordained Misfi...
10/21/08 (04:47 PM) 
Oh to love someone's Eloquence... that's some heavy ish right there... I like that

  Hank
10/19/08 (08:54 PM) 
Take it to the next level Lique! This is some next level shit 4 real! You really know how to express you for someone...wonder who you're refering to. Outstanding Kid! Keep up the good work!

  B. Rose
10/19/08 (04:43 AM) 
Well I heard it... so ummm... yeah this was defintely smooth... loved the shoutout too... *smiles* youre sweet.... lol... but the tomagchi and gigapet line though... classic...

  Insatiable.ves...
10/18/08 (09:52 PM) 
awwwwwwwwwwww!!! Good looks wit the acknowledgment!! um, yea i kno EXACTLY how this feels... i have a friend, soon to be more than a friend *crosses fingers* that when he speaks, my skin melts and i just let my body go cuz just hearin him gives me those good vibrations!! SHEESH! but this was a great write.. i love ya flow.. and u prolly wrote this in 5 mins. i can tell in her writes that u just flow, and talk...and it goes so natural, but its so great. lol and nice nostalgic reference wit the to...
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  Rosey
10/18/08 (09:26 PM) 
oh wow. . . lovin the shout outs, but ummm so this is how I felt when I first started talkin to Jaysin. . . ahhhhh. . . I tell ya, girl. . .. mmm, whew! A deep sexy voice, just gets you on them lonely nights. . . and I'm too mad at that Giga pet and tomagochi. . . pullin stuff from the threads I see, but it was tastefully used, lol, hotness sis, hotness!

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