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"I'm Living Lies"
  by *~§Poetic§~*


I've been living wut most would call a
Lie........
But I've known this for quite some time
But.......
I thought that things would get better
Then.....
they got worse you started staying out
Late.....
Started getting phone calls at all times of the night
Why.....
Do you continue to hide your wrongs its to
Late.....
I've always known what was going on
But.....
I loved you still despite all the lies
Yet.....
Still you bring me to do nothing but
Cry.........
I've been faithful and you been fake
You've..........
Done nothing but take my love
For.....
Worthless
Pointless
Depthless
Feelings
and you've gave me in return a
hurt......
with no healing
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Date Submitted: Mar 25, 2008 (12:26 PM)
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  AR-15
05/04/08 (05:34 PM) 
This poems sounds like a lot of my close peers past relationships... nothing but a mixed bag full of lies and broken hearts, but that's another story. Very well written piece

  danceluv08
04/06/08 (02:13 PM) 
GREAT POEM...VERY DEEP POEM...I CAN RELATE..IM GLAD U SHARED THIS TO US GS COMMUNITY..REALLY APPRECIATED AND U

  mizzonyia
04/02/08 (10:13 PM) 
Great poem! It touched me, with my own personal experience.

  princessnikki
03/30/08 (11:30 PM) 
i can relate to this so much...sounds like my relationship right now..horr write..10 starz

  Pip
03/29/08 (10:02 PM) 
Wow very deep poem, I love it. The line "I've been faithful and you been fake" is amazing. I can completley relate. 10 stars!

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