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"Im Not Gone"
  by *SaVaGe*


Special - Drake


Everybody Hoping That I start chocking
Like there chick, when she deep throatin,
My Rope In, Keep jokein, The laughs on you
Verbally inhaled lyrics, that what I do
I feel there’s no competition
Like everyone bailed out, cause they couldn’t afford to pay tuition
Keep wishin, ima be the one to blow out the lights
I bout my flow, and I could barely afford the price
That shows you how nice, and how I spit precise
Your Luck Like Dice, I believe Like Christ
So That makes you once in awhile good, and me forever nice
So realize what ever lies beneath ya eyes
Cause I was once below, but now I arise
My bars aren’t secrets, more like a surprise
Hear Me Clearly, Cause I sincerely Love yall dearly
But Feel No one feels me, But don’t fear me
Cause that’s a bitch act, still rock meh, like throwbacks
Don't look back focus your eyes in front
Cause most cats front,
then there acts are fatal and they call it a stunt
And claim they blew you out, like a burned blunt
Never New SaV come back and give yall something to hear
Its like the hole world went away, and are afraid to come near
Cause I don't smear, and see my way through clear
Don't listen to bullshit, cause its soon to be flushed
Don't love my writes, its more like lust
Cause I spit it and I see its blush
So while you sit there and fuss
I have nothing to say, more like a Hush
I told yall my arrive wouldn't be long
I was just waiting to see what would happen, Im not Gone


Hahaha..Be Easy..SaVaGe
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Date Submitted: Sep 07, 2008 (01:24 AM)
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  Guey2
09/16/08 (12:47 AM) 
"yo So that makes makes you once in ahile good but me forever nice." upper level shit cuz that line alone got like three layers. That nigga drake be clowning i peeped a few of his joints. this track fits the vibe of what u spitting. keep scribin man.

  Demon of Darkn...
09/07/08 (02:08 PM) 
DANG BRA DIS IS ALWAYS THE WAY, AND I KNOW THAT FEELING LIKE MY BRA TRU SAYS CUZ IVE BEEN DARE.. YOU POETICAL FLOW IS OF THE CHAIN.. YOU KNOW DAT I AM A MASIVE FAN OF YOURS.. YOU TRULY LAY DOWN YOUR WORDS WITH INSPIRATION.. MASSIVE UPS DK

  TRU-IN-DEED
09/07/08 (10:50 AM) 
Hmm okay i see you young bruh I can sense your frustration for not being read as much as you should...believe me, i have been there , not only that but i am just as frustrated for you and others who are goin through it. Shit i even adressed it in "tru statements". But yea this was tight, but my only critique would be that in my opinion this started off blazin hot, then lost just a lil steam near the end. I think my stuff is the opposite i think I start off luke warm then end off hot lol i dunno ...
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