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"I'm Not Perfect"
  by jhalilz


In a world filled with doubt
Why am i to give answers to those without
I'm really no better than you
So why look to me when you don't have a clue
Yes i may know things that you don't know
But i'm not a vessel through which knowledge endleesly flows
Yes i've been through things that you may have not
But how do you think i got the answers i got
By making mistakes and fixing them to
And that's the same way you have to get through
I can't hold your hand through life
And i can't tell you how to end your strife
Because i'm still going through somethings myself
A nd the decisions i make aren't always good for my health
So stop looking to me for the answers
For tho i may play the part, i'm really not that mature
I have a lot of things in life i still have to go through
And i can't do that if i'm baby-sitting you
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Date Submitted: Nov 14, 2008 (09:11 AM)
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  tamara843chuck...
11/15/08 (07:53 PM) 
you went hard core on dis...i aint neva heard a poem like ids 10 starz

  LaLa14
11/15/08 (10:48 AM) 
real talk...i feel you on this...it is hard tryin to give people advice on what to do if you got a lot of things your still dealing with...the hard part is the poeple who ask expect you to kno the answer all the time...but what they dont realize is life, trials, and tribulations is what give you the knowledge...an fa real tell them that...tell em only time can tell on what they should do...only time can tell anythin...whether a choice was good or bad...but fa real i got respect fa you on this cu...
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