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"I'm Open"
  by .Mase Da Rula.




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Track 8 - Jazzy - Open Playlist at Follow Her On Twitter @ OhJazzy





in angelic tones
she sings
her notes reverberating
off my soul
in perfect pitch

harmoniously
in tune
to the
passion
she brings

so supreme
she gleams
like
diamonds
upon rings

allowing
the rays
of her aura
to radiate
within me

multiplying
&
dividing
into something
unseen

not an emotion
of the
familiar
born within
my dreams

fantasizing
about
future scenarios
where you
are with me

and
me is synonymous
with pronoun
called
we

where are our love
symbolizes everything
that's good in this world
from here
till the cliffs of eternity

right here
in front of me
seeing
the notes of infatuation
as they float ceremoniously

[beautiful ain't it...?]

I'm open to the world now
and can't nothing ever
taint it


written by
.Mase Da Rula.®©™
Diesel From Tha D Inc

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Date Submitted: Jul 25, 2009 (12:03 AM)
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  The Clinician
09/22/09 (11:01 PM) 
Nice flow. U have a positive aura resignating within you. Keep inkin, you've got skillz.

  LatrinaThePoet
08/16/09 (03:00 AM) 
im really feeling this piece... well written..

  Angel
08/04/09 (09:11 PM) 
Open to the world now... That's what Miss Hurston referred to as "petal open".. I picture a beautiful rose in full bloom... that's some loving.. beautiful piece

  written by tho...
07/31/09 (01:43 AM) 
the rays of her aura to radiate within you i liked the thought within the words

  cybersamm
07/26/09 (07:07 AM) 
and your dam right its beautiful.....i can see your soul smiling for real.......incredibly touching .a u dat....my mann.mmm big loves mase...

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