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"I'm Over It...."
  by Syndel


I’m over it
Have to be over it what’s left to do with it
Hell I am over it

Done cried the beginning middle and end
Ran thru go just to reunite the sin

I’m over it

Daddy’s midnight delight
Mommies constant fight

What happens here stays
Yet I live this forced grave

And I am over it….

I have carried the baggage of many
Given when didn’t have any

Yet taken and being taken remain
Insane but the same from a child’s frame

Jesus please release the demons
I see when closed eyes breathe

I am over it ……….

You knew not who you destroyed
Being used as a toy
To satisfy wicked joy

Slither thru grass
How long does judgment last

Not pretty enough
( I’m over it )

Not smart enough
( I’m over it )

Not thin enough
( I’m over it )

Not strong enough
( I’m over it )

Enough


And I am over it

I am beautiful
I am bountiful
I am soulful

I am couture in your selfish mediocre life

Worth love and being loved
.
It shall be mine

For God gave me victory
This time
So

In case you didn’t get the memo
Know ………

I am over it ……………
I Know Ive Been Changed - Lashun Pace Rhodes
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Date Submitted: Nov 01, 2009 (08:13 AM)
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  Angel
11/12/09 (02:34 PM) 
It's crazy. Everytime I'm feeling some kindof way or going through a certain time in my life, your poetry reflects that. You're definitely preaching to the choir right now, Miss Syndel. And I'm feeling just like this - the picture's not perfect by any stretch of the imagination, but I'm over the idea of trying to make it look and feel like perfection. Powerful piece...

  BSavvy
11/08/09 (09:34 PM) 
The frustration in the piece and the fed up feeling.. Sometimes it's like that but you are strong God mommy so you will weather this storm, we take a lickin but we keep on tickin... Release your pain and frustrations away bc tomorrow when you get up you will feel so much lighter and you will see so much clearer... Breathe, don't forget to breathe... Hugs...

  African Queen
11/03/09 (03:22 AM) 
I was a positive piece ma....stay positive and forget those and whatever tries to break that positivity line that you stand in...nice work!

  Shani. Medicin...
11/02/09 (06:15 PM) 
Nicely said and done. kudos to you and this write.

  after vision
11/01/09 (06:12 PM) 
i see that you brought the message home from church today my poet

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