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"Im So Different"
  by Bestever


I Work, nap, and then again I see Work
(it give me something to do plus an overflow of perk) *sniffs*
The prettiest of all things includes flesh and rings; oh the Joy and Freedom that Life can bring

The grittiest of scenes but still I reside as David's chosen King
money fiend just like everyone else but with a chronilogical way of making the butter cream
I dream like you dream but not everything is what it seems
I bleed like you bleed but I wear Red because a real Blood can smell whenever Death is nearing...

Keep my eyes on the Prize and let invisible Spirits continue steering...
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Date Submitted: Dec 04, 2008 (01:55 PM)
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  Bella Poetik
12/18/08 (07:11 PM) 
"I dream like you dream but not everything is what it seems" i have pretty much the same philosophy. "Keep my eyes on the Prize and let invisible Spirits continue steering..." that shows your humility and acceptance that you cannot control all things that happen in your life. A deep respect for the greater scheme of things and that there is one that controls life and fate- i can completely relate to this. I agree with Roxie, i did feel a tad disappointed because i wanted to read more but i can u...
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  kenna
12/15/08 (03:14 PM) 
This is really good. i'm lovin it. good write 10 STARZ

  --->ROXIE<---
12/04/08 (02:39 PM) 
see!!! u really do purposely try to piss me off wit these tease writes...cuz i was really into this one!! i coulda kept on reading!! but NOOOO u wanna stop short! lol...im really digiin this

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