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"IM SO FRESH!!!!!!!!!!!!"
  by BLACK STORM


THIS POEM...IS 4 ALL THE LADIES WHO WAS DEEP IN LOVE.....BETTER YET IN THAT ESCTASY LOVE.....THEN THINGS WENT ALL WRONG.....AN U WOULD B DOWN, STRESSED OUT,CONFUSED,BLUE,BASICALLY NOT ACTIN LIKE YOU....
YOU TRY 2 FIGURE WHAT WENT WRONG.....THEN U LISTEN 2 DEM SAD SONGS..
WONDERIN IF U SHOULD CALL AND APOLLOGIZE 4 WHATEVA REASON......
WELL THIS POEM IS 4 YOU....


IM SITTIN DOWN WONDERIN WHY
AM I SITTIN DOWN FEELIN DOWN
WHEN YOU WAS NEVA AROUND
IT MAY SOUND KINDA HARSH BUT ITS THE TRUTH(FEEL ME)
I REMEBER I WANTED U 2 B KING ON THE THRONE
WHILE I WAS QUEEN WIT THA CROWN
I HAD MAJOR DREAMS BRINGING U INTO MY TEAM
SO WE CAN BUILD OUR C.R.E.A.M
I HAD PLANS 4 US 2 BUILD BUSINESS EMPIRE'S
FROM THE GROUND.PA U SURE WAS SOMETHIN
BUT I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY U TREATED ME LIKE I WAS NOTHING..
I NOT GONNA LIE I WANTED 2 B WIFEY 2 DA FULLEST AND PLAY MY PART
BUT U DON'T KNOW HOW BAD U BROKE MY HEART
I TOLD U WHAT I WAS ABOUT FROM THE START
I REALLY NEVA WANTED US 2 FALL APART
KUZ U WAS MY HEART....
NOW MY WHOLE DEMEANOR CHANGED
I REALIZE SUM NIGGAZ AINT SHIT AND SO LAME
PLAYIN WIT NO GAME....MYSTERY THE BROOKLYN BANGER PUSHIN
THE RANGE. SO YALL LAMES BETTA STAY IN YA LANE KUZ BLACKSTORM
HAS TRANSFORMED NOT INTO THE PUNISHER BUT MRS.HURRICANE
THIS NOT A GAME SO UNDERSTAND MY NAME...MRS HURRICANE


IM SO INSPIRED
IM ON FIRE
YOU ARE EXPIRED
I'M SO TIRED
NO RE-HIRING
SAAMIYAH IS
SO FRESH 2 DEF
IMA CONTINUE MY EMPIRE WIT U OR WITHOUT YOU
KUZ IM DAT DAMN INSPIRED
SO TO THOSE LAMES OUT THERE
WHO TREATIN THERE GIRL WRONG
NOT GIVIN HER THE ATTENTION AND,AFFECTION,
U BETTER COME CORRECT KUZ WE AINT GONNA B SITTIN
BY THE PHONE ALL NITE CRYIN ....SINGIN MARY J SAD SONG
GET UR SHIT RIGHT KUZ IT JUST MIGHT B ANOTHA MAN WHO CAN TAKE UR SPOT......

SO LADIES !!!!
IF U FEEL ME!!!
FEEL WHAT IM GOIN THRU!!!
BRUSH IT OFF AND LOOK IN THE MIRROR
AND SAY FUCK THAT..IM SO RAW!!!
IM SO FRESH!!! IM SO DOPE!!!! NOPE I AINT GONNA B SITTIN HERE
FEELIN LIKE MY HOPE BEIN CHOKE WIT A ROPE.SO NOPE !!!!IMA GET UP AND DO ME!!!!BEST BELIEVE IMA DO ME!!!

HAHA......IM SO CONTAGIOUS
I KEEP EM ANXIOUS
IM SO PERSUASIVE
ALL THE STRESS,
THE YELLIN, PUSHIN ME 2 BACK BURNA MOVEMENT
.....HAHA
ONLY MOTIVATES ME 2 KEEP TALKIN SHIT BEIN DAT SHIT!!!! KUZ ITZ MY PEROGATIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA...LOL...CHEAHHHHHHHHHHHHH

U DAMN RITE MY PEROGATIVE!!!!!!! IM SO F.R.E.S.H



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Date Submitted: Sep 24, 2007 (09:53 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (36)
  Werschky
09/29/07 (11:14 AM) 
wow im really feelin u with this one... i like it a lot

  dime
09/29/07 (01:33 AM) 
dis go hard n mary j thats my chick we got tha same style n my name sumayyah

  TwiZted
09/28/07 (10:25 PM) 
FRESH!!! yeh dat shyt is real na'mean...feelin tha same shyt rye now na'mean, lovin n needin hard 2 keep breathin cud u str8 feenin but shyt dis poem ma u caught erry emotion i am feelin @ tha tyme..keep writin keep doin you cud you madd talented madd kreative...i look 4ward 2 readin all you shyt....Stay Blessed

  Anto
09/27/07 (04:08 PM) 
DAMN DIS IS MADD KRAZY YO...U VERY TALENTED ...KEEP DOIN U

  YUNG STREETZ
09/26/07 (05:01 PM) 
wow dis madd hott...u sick son...

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