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"Impact"
  by AR-15


I was at home all alone
no calls from the cell phone
So I logged on
and got a message from her
she's now logged on
She tells me about some problems
and I read so that I can solve them
She tells me her ex chooses not to be friends again
But She is hoping for ways to make amends
She asks for help because she doesn't understand
why he doesn't accept that she's with another man
I felt nervous as sweat ran down my face
because I knew she was truthful
and I didn't want her to go through the worst case
So I gave her advice, on the current situation
To help relieve her from this erupting altercation
The next day, she tells me things didn't work out
and all I felt was signs of falling out
my advice did not work as well in the end
I felt like I was a bad friend
But then she says, it'll be alright
I'm over this fight
Then occurs another glimpse, of that distant daylight
She thanks me for the advice again
We both won in the end
She lost but we both gained a better friend
It feels like a very strange case
We impacted each other without meeting face to face
She's motivated me to do more
as we keep touching base
and just for her,
I will continue to spread my gift from God's grace
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Date Submitted: Sep 12, 2007 (12:45 AM)
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  TruePoetess
02/18/08 (05:29 PM) 
I liked this one...it was really beautiful but I'm lost...was this like an internet relationship or what? I hate reading peoples poems and truly understanding their meanings(of no fault to you of course) that bugs me lol. So if you could explain this to me.

  Ncognito
09/13/07 (05:35 PM) 
Nice story my dude. U playin the role of the love doctor. U did have an "impact" on her life. Probably more than u even know.

  lilhot
09/13/07 (04:23 PM) 
hey the advice dont always have to be on point but you always have to remember that at least you was there when she needed you to be. Thats all that mattered in the end. i really liked this keep them coming

  so_sexy
09/12/07 (09:01 PM) 
OMG i did not kow what to expect this was wonderful and so true. i thank you once more. i am so speachless and don't know how to put this but you is one of the worlds most greatest friends there are. trust me you can't find many like you. what a wonderful surpries that a girl could ever get......

  sexy.beautiful...
09/12/07 (02:29 PM) 
this was so nice of u to help her out i liked the overall concept this was point on and some people do go through this.....nice for u to be there for her

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