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"in the bed room"
  by dough gurl


you and me sexullay commited, you putting your dick where you see fitted
us makin love like theres no tomorrow, and az you are freaking me I forget about all my sorrow.I want chew to pick me up and put me on the wall bend
me over and grab it all. my legs on your shoulder while there shaking, and me riding your dick and you feel my pussy vibrating. we are playng all day cuz you made my body your playground, you hit me from the front and then turn me around and cant hold it no more cause you put on me so good I had to scream your name, your dick so good nigga you put me in pain, your dick hit my stomach and made throw upI told chew I was finna come and I knew you was finna nut so you went faster and faster until tears rolled down my eyes, yo sex in the bed room was so good you made me cry..............................................................
I woke up and I still had the bed room mentallty, and called him on the phone to make this a reality

this is to my new boo he kno who he is this is from the heart and this is how I feel and want to make this real
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Date Submitted: Apr 27, 2007 (03:22 PM)
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  MiamiMack
07/30/07 (11:12 AM) 
Damn ma...that was hot...like how u went in depth with it...It wuz bangin'...Good work

  peanut lol(bur...
07/23/07 (02:28 PM) 
dat waz hott rite der lol 10 starz

  flava
06/29/07 (05:21 PM) 
gurl you got skillz keep it coming

  Statz
06/04/07 (02:00 PM) 
AW THIS WAS STRAIGHT NICE. I LIKE HOW YOU TRICK THE READER INTO THINKING THAT YOU ACTUALLY DOING YOUR THING BUT ACTUALLY ITZ JUST A DREAM. THATS SHOWS THAT YOU GOT SKILLS. REAL TIGHT WRITE!!!!!!!!1

  novice
05/17/07 (11:34 AM) 
This was a good one...I like how it was real and any person would be lucky if somebody wrote a poem like this about them...so you did ya thang lil mama...good job

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