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"Indipendent"
  by 1_lizzy


Your always telling me what to do
I need my own space my room to move
I know as long as l belive in myself
Theres no need to rely on enyone elts
Dont think that i dont love you cause I do
I just need to know how to make it on my own
And if the going gets tough I'll stand alone
Taking my chances out on my own
Im going to live my life my way
Im going to make you see
So I need you to set me free
You know its up to me
I want to be indipendent
I want to live my life the way i want to live it
And I want you to know that im the boss
And im going to make it out on my own
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Date Submitted: Nov 01, 2007 (11:15 AM)
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  sexy.beautiful...
11/14/07 (11:17 AM) 
u go and be independent everyone needs space once and awhile.....10 starz and live their own life to how they want to live it

  eagleswings
11/12/07 (12:57 PM) 
very nice. 10 stars..

  LIFE'S POET
11/08/07 (10:57 PM) 
INDEPENDENT BOO...........THIS WAS VERY NICE WRITE TOO. IT SHOWED YOUR STRENGTH AND CHARACTER

  williesidney
11/01/07 (04:40 PM) 
Real nice write don't never stop writting because you have a special way with words ten stars.

  King Leo
11/01/07 (02:17 PM) 
The trouble with us guys is that we always think we need to protect the ladies. Sometimes we forget that they can sometimes take care of themselves.

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