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"Indulgence"
  by PoeticSoulja


Bumpin - Wes Montgomery

Nectar trickles freely down her luscious thighs
The silk sheets are being grasped tightly
Delightfully making her my musical instrument
Beautiful melodies are released with passion

My palate yearns for more satisfaction
The daughter of Neptune delivers more divine waves
Tempting my lust into becoming insatiable
The tongue slithers vigorously on the moist terrain

Great walls are subjected to tender caressing
Every stroke provokes wetness into accumulating
The marvelous slit acts as a fountain of succulence
Showering me with countless amounts of sweetness

Giving my goddess the ultimate tribute of love
Her unsurpassed enchantment gratifies me
Our souls are intertwined in an unexplainable way
As my being drifts off into a realm of rapture

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Date Submitted: Oct 03, 2008 (05:45 PM)
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  Poetic Warrior
08/25/09 (10:01 AM) 
Well mr man!! this was beautifully crafted like a gossamer silk web. I am astounded. It was sexy but angelic because of the metaphors and how you crafted the verses. a hot fave honey 10*

  Shamma
06/24/09 (08:25 AM) 
I have to read it again and again. soothing - yet exciting! excellent!

  Mz.PoeticOffic...
04/28/09 (08:38 PM) 
Boo, you are a poetic god. This poem is extrodinary... I mean, the visions that are painted with your every detailed intellectual word, the original metaphors that gave an idea and a new twist to sex and love, the respect you placed on the one whom you were sharing this experience with her. Wow, this is just amazing...kinda breathtaking actually. I love it. 10 points and a fav from me.

  Iaintgot1
03/04/09 (11:28 PM) 
all I can do is smile...so good...

  Zenniyshkka- n...
03/03/09 (07:13 PM) 
very gracefull...i love it i definetly give u 10 starz

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