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"Ink Tears"
  by mindbenda


Driven by the pain that filters my life
Write after write so the knife don't reach the juguler
Life can be uglier, so I've heard but seeing mom higher then birds
Got me thinking what u just said is upserd
So I form my sanity threw words and these words manifest when I blow the herbs
High like asain math scores
got me chasin paths wrong
Watching family members pass on making my soul burn like I'm posessed by a dragon
But I scribble flames on the pad , please understand everything I write is true to this man
Moving moutains then finding youth threw my foutain pen
Options when I write to promote truth or profit shit
Gotta spit the realest shit illest shit
Never quit the ink saves me
The words engrave me the flows amazing
It's crazy how poetry changed me
Daily I thank god for the gift he's given
Living this life threw ink spilling
Murdering my writes like I'm a super villian
Drilling my words in minds like a dentist givin a tooth filling
Letting the tears form from my eyes and spill threw my pen
G-nice I love ya and u will never be forgotten
You took ur last breath on earth but your first steps in heaven
Tension builds in my shoulders
Going threw paper like I was a baller
To try and express my feelings of ur life bieng over
Hold up, g-nice u was a warrior, a great coach a soldier
A best friend, a wonderful soul and most of all my brother
Rest in peace and I will love you forever...
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Date Submitted: Apr 08, 2009 (01:36 PM)
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  Chinazy
09/02/09 (11:45 AM) 
really great poem..i digg it

  TANENE
08/21/09 (12:16 AM) 
I'm really feelin this. I luv the title u gave it INK TEARS....10 STARS! KEEP PUSHIN THAT PEN...

  tngrl
06/02/09 (06:13 PM) 
how touching... im so sorry to hear that you have lost someone so close to you but as you said so beautifully he took his last breath on earth but his first steps in heaven... he is def watching over you! this was truly one of your best pieces! i pray that God and time will help ease your pain! Much love to you MB! xoxo

  THE {{GAME}}
06/02/09 (05:46 PM) 
FEELiiN THE WRiiTE...THE iiNK iiS WHAT SAVES ME T00...KEEP THE iiNK FL0WiiN..10STARS

  PoeticStarChil...
05/20/09 (01:03 PM) 
This poem is so painfully beautiful. I could feel the emotion and I relate to this so much. "It's crazy how poetry changed me Daily i thank God for the gift he's given living this like through ink spilling" SO REAL I am faving this write! 10 10 10 10

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