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"INSIDE MY EYES"
  by mykah


if you could take a little time
just take a quick look and tell me what you see
inside my eyes

if you dont know
i could tell you
if you want to listen

im sufficating
in my own life
someone help me breathe

im drowning
in my own tears
some one try to save me

i pretend that im happy
with the smile i wear
and everyone believes

i was taught not to lie
but if people knew what i was really thinking
they'd wish i had lied to them

no one knows who i am
they know the person,
i want them to know

peope say they care
but i cant trust enough
to believe them

how can i look forward
when we were only born
and only live
for the purpose to die
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Date Submitted: Mar 16, 2008 (09:24 AM)
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  Nubian
06/26/08 (04:17 AM) 
dis really blew my mind.....i can relate ta dis on different levels......keep dat pen movin.....you got da talent

  Lani
04/08/08 (09:30 PM) 
they some powerful words mykah and i understand i feel me falling in a deep black whole that never seems to end and i look over and your there next to me on the same journey as im on. i'll love ya always and we will go through everything side by side no matter how bad it is1 xxx

  Nilla
03/23/08 (07:55 AM) 
if you look at the world like that, baby, you'll stay held down. sometimes we go thru things that got us ready to throw our hands up with life, in general, BUT you can't. gotta hold ya head up, baby girl. and that's real. this piece was so well written, man. you took me into your emotions and ii liked the way you worded it. "ii'M suffocating in my own life, someone help me breathe. ii'M drowning in my own tears, someone try to save me. ii pretend that ii'M happy with the smile ii wear and everyo...
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  Shaded eyes
03/23/08 (05:34 AM) 
Love the poem by the way? haha

  Shaded eyes
03/23/08 (05:34 AM) 
Wow... shit babe emo mood or what?? i love you. you can talk to me. aye? trust is hard. Better to not to talk bout it some times. to real hey.

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