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"inside my mind"
  by BMSN


inside my mind
the nothingness is to painful to hide
the stride of my mind where my life resides
and here i am just along for the ride
inside my mind
i am what i want to be
never unhappy always smilling
thinking about all the beef i had with these peets
and how full i was when they gave me the chance to eat
inside my mind
i am legend like will smith
i am tupac, i rose from the grave like jesus, i am myth
stories are made and named out of me
inside my mind
is the only place that im safe in this world
from all the violence
all the grief
all the hate
all the pain
all the evil
my mind is the only place that i can hide
the only place where i know you can't touch me
inside my mind
i am home
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Date Submitted: Oct 16, 2008 (04:21 PM)
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  glammm1
09/20/09 (01:34 PM) 
I feel this one so deeply. Been there a few times. Nice one.

  carmelcoatedla...
09/16/09 (10:03 AM) 
You ned to be free, like yesterday and I am feeling you, there is nothing like not feeling free, inner bondage is hell

  คว...
09/16/09 (09:32 AM) 
nice, alot of people tend to find piece within themselves...and their mind is their sanctuary....a place with hidden thoughts that no one else will ever be able to touch....i love this cause i think alot of people will relate to it, and understand it....excellent write

  Remy82
09/16/09 (09:09 AM) 
I loved it. We are bumbarded with things we want to be free of and get away from and the only place that we truly are alone and away from all this mess IS indeed inside our minds. What a great expression here. What's even greater though is that as poets we are able to express what is inside our minds on paper and share with other's who may or may not feel the same way. We thus inspire, encourage or what have you. Thanks for your thoughts. Keep writing!!

  BRANNU
08/29/09 (08:38 PM) 
We are all at home inside our mind (well i would like to think we all are lol) but you let us inside of yours for a brief moment and its greatly appreciated.

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