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"INSIDE STRUGGLE"
  by AmateurNoMore


One of those wars inside yourself;
gotta do tha right thing, but the right thing isn't always the best;
is it?
Best...as in morally
Best...as in physically and emotionally
Best...as in Godly
Best...as in self-attaining

Pick your poison, choose wisely, because your fortunes depend on it
What fortunes do you desire?
Moral
Physical and emotional
Godly
Self-attaining

What's one to say is best?
Really six in one hand and a half-dozen in the other.
It's about the present...or is it the future?
Forging seasoned relationships and securing fresh ones,
but what's more significant?
Depends on the day I suppose....
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Date Submitted: Jul 12, 2009 (10:10 PM)
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  Cornfed
08/01/09 (11:27 PM) 
As stated before the last line you nailed the whole pen and made it yours and yours alone! Very cool!

  Ezdozit
07/13/09 (01:22 PM) 
Very nice piece

  TheUltimateCur...
07/13/09 (08:39 AM) 
"Depends on the day I supose..." Say no more...!

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