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"Insignificant"
  by W_J_lyriC


you say I'm insignificant
and I'll never amount to nothing
you say I'm no good
and a hazard to the public
so what of it
why even get me started on the subject
just because I'm a young black male
doesn't mean I can't be trusted
so what if I'm not proper
that's just who I am
and I wish you had the balls to call me insignificant again
I'm tired of being another number
just another statistic
when I know I got more of future
then your silly degree from princeton
I hope the right people listening
because this message ain't for everyone
you say I'm worth nothing
I say I've just begun
I will not sit back and rest until I feel I'm number one
and even when that day comes I will never be done
I will never say I'm finished
I will never concede to you
I'm going to keep moving up
until the day I die
then I'll be through
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Date Submitted: Oct 16, 2009 (01:44 PM)
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  *Jazique*
11/02/09 (12:03 AM) 
I believe that all minorities, mainly blacks and latinos; have to prove to this world/society/economy that we're more than they think we are...we can accomplish many things with or without money....

  S.A.L.T.
10/26/09 (11:01 AM) 
Very deep! Continue to be who you are and do what you do because if you change for someone else you\'ll be defeating your whole person and who u are as an individual. Nice write.

  IjusWannaBE
10/25/09 (11:41 PM) 
nicw word choice.even with the title insignifigant is such a strong word when being used to descrine an INDIVIDUAL ya know...this was veryy \"simply stated\" i guess i can say-like u just wrote exactly how u felt n it still managed 2 come off strong. my fave line is: \"..when i KNOW i got more of a future\". nicewrite

  The Clinician
10/24/09 (10:04 PM) 
Nice scribe with a nice message. Don\'t judge what you don\'t know. You on some real shit with this my brotha.

  Cyn-Cyn
10/22/09 (10:51 PM) 
wow this is really good. the greatest revenge is being successful when people dont think you cant

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