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"Intuition"
  by Rocky
  - This Poem is a response to the poem THOUGHT OF YOU....... by BLACK STORM


Feel like its All on Me
like destiny calling
Damn, It's crazy
my mind hazy
thinkin God's tryin to play me
my minds dialating off the talks that went deep
but its the talking that could save me
pulls me up when Im stuck
see Im laying down
thinking real hard
bout what Im saying now
not wanting to just write a poem
but to lay it down
laying grounds
not wanting to cross boundaries
or step out of bounds
but talking to her
is like blowing an ounce
energized when she calls
now im sitting up
Worried
cuz the xtasy off it
might get me in trouble when my P.O.
wants me to piss in a cup
Thats Whats Up!!!!!
Im laying out
cause I talk & get open
like an ocean
refreshed like a splash of water
by talks of your relationship with your father
or my plans when when I graduate from Bauder
this is just the start up
something manifesting
I got no answers for ya'll
so it aint no question
it might seem like Im going hard but
there is more to it what it seems
it is so profound
shorty really got game
because Im not playing around
haven't been playing risk since
cuz when you play you risk
Imma gonna take it slow with her
not be too quick
but recommend when we
see each other we dance to this..............

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Date Submitted: Sep 24, 2007 (09:51 PM)
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  Lil Ma
09/24/07 (10:31 PM) 
awww this cute, i can picture myself as well laying back in my bed thinkin about the one i love. pleas show luv 2 one of me poems in return!!!

  BLACK STORM
09/24/07 (10:04 PM) 
CHEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.......EXCLUSIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!EXTRA EXTRA..READ ALLA BOUT IT..LOL....I DIG IT

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