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"Is It Really Worth It????"
  by DOMINICANPOET


I not trying to diss anyone
And I am not writing for fun
I say the words I say cause they are real
And these rappers only rap for a record deal
If you listen to rap its all the same
You get a few who are different but most of them are lame
Talking bout guns, sex, and selling drugs
And they ain’t nothing but some fake ass thugs
How can you rap bout things like this?
When you know that your main audience is the kids
You have no respect for them and really don’t care…

Kids having kids to me that’s not fair
Your fifteen and don’t even know how to wipe your own ass
And cant even be on time to class
But you’re pregnant with a child
Cause you running the streets buck wild
Its funny cause you wanted a baby
Wanted to be a grown up… better yet a lady!!
The baby father you do not know cause you let everyone fuck you
Now you don’t know what to do
Cause your body isn’t even fully developed

Ever wonder why this generation is corrupted
Its because no one gives a fuck anymore
Nowadays it’s cute to be called a whore
You get cool points for fucking everyone
And killing people is a hobby better yet just plain fun
I just wish people would stop being so stupid
Think before you have a kid
And before killing someone second-guess it
Is it worth it?
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Date Submitted: Apr 30, 2008 (11:06 PM)
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  RUBY RED DBL R
05/27/08 (12:33 AM) 
i love the way this write had an edge and you just flowed with it powerful message and great srotytelling skills

  b3yond r3d3mpt...
05/19/08 (07:31 PM) 
damn i like how u be killin it when u dont even got a insturmental gud ish "wifey" lol

  j-real
05/19/08 (05:57 PM) 
(snappin my fingers) now this is soul i can dig this. It's so true

  MiltownJosh
05/18/08 (10:23 PM) 
u title ur comments well and the content always meets expectation plus so much more, great write, the wordplay was off the chain, one more like this i might have to add u, mucho appreciano mi amigo, holla

  LJThePoet
05/18/08 (10:16 PM) 
A very powerful message that is presented in this piece.Great write and everything you say in this piece is real.

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