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"Is she your sooouuullll mate?"
  by Forgotten1
  - This Poem is a response to the poem is he your sooouuullll mate? by the h.


Is she in your bed again?
Cause she gives the best head you say
How she lets you ram her back door raw night and day

So you’ve forgiven her for keying your car
Blowing up yo mammas phone crying how you
Did her wrong just telling all your business
Not making your kids stay in school

Is she your sooouuullll mate?
Is it because of that fat ass I hear you brag about on the b ball courts
How she does 3somes with 2 of them
no matter how you cant concentrate
cause she still calls one of em

Funny how you don’t see me trying to be the best friend
You could fall in love with
How I’ve listen to your complaints about her
How she swallows you whole and you forgive and forgive
Even after 2 paternity tests were inconclusive

Why aren’t you pissed at her still hitting the clubs
Dressed like the hoochie mamma you met her as
Still taking numbers and shaking that ass
How the hell can you believe her
“babe it’s all bout yous”
“I don’t’ give a shit about those dudes”

Is she your sooouuullll mate?
When are you gonna
let a Ho do what it do?
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Date Submitted: Jul 28, 2007 (09:54 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 07/29/07 (11:20 PM)
Author: Conceited252
Poem Title: Yes I am his soul ma...

Date: 07/29/07 (03:33 PM)
Author: Prohood
Poem Title: IS SHE?

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comment icon  COMMENTS (16)
  L@LIT@
08/26/07 (02:55 AM) 
hmm i like this it was very good keep it up :)

  Jonathan Robin...
08/22/07 (04:14 AM) 
every man has been blinded by lust at some point in his life...10 stars...interesting concept.

  Pollyanna
08/19/07 (08:06 PM) 
Brilliant,amazing,inspired

  Blaque Beauty
08/17/07 (06:52 AM) 
Ha ha nicely done but you can't hate the playa......

  alwayslena
08/06/07 (11:20 PM) 
damn i really like this.i am thinkin about doing a response on the flip side about being his REAL sould mate feel me?? but this is really good commin from this side of veiw ver nice write

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