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"Is That Right Phinest"
  by datboyjada
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Good Good pt1 by Phinest


This mechanic can fix anything under your hood
Come June we will really have to see what's good
It's not just the word play or the slick talk
I got plaques on the wall from chicks saying how good my dick walk
Can i get it wet the question is can u keep it up
And will you be able to handle me once i speed it up
Is you gone tell me to keep going or take it out
Last chick that talk shit like dis in the hospital and has yet to make it out
N trust you wont be able to recover
From the beast that i pack inside this magnum latex rubber
But if you can than shit it's fair game
Nothing but clothes taking off like an airplane
Some say it's the motion in the ocean
Fuck dat i'm trying to have your heart saying wus all the commotion
And now it's known Jada is on that Navy shit
Backshots will have u thinking what day it is
Madden never 2K9 maybe
But when it comes to sex don't play the kid
Just set the bar I'll pass the test
And when it's all said and done you can announced to GS Poetry that datboyjada is so phinest

It won't even be close more like a landslide
need i say more
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Date Submitted: Mar 19, 2009 (08:50 PM)
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  Phinest
03/22/09 (12:02 PM) 
ok ok....like i said i hear ya.....come June...im rdy fa wateva u tryn to bring to the table....calln me out ok...i spared ya...but i guess pt2 ain't gon b nutn nice....so u betta brace urself wit wat i got commn fa u next.....~smiles

  ladyvirtue
03/21/09 (06:44 PM) 
dang. got swagg huh lol? talk what you know. great response. trying to have your heart saying wus the commotion love that line. keep it up.

  dontnohow
03/19/09 (09:16 PM) 
aent nothin better then whats this way..(smile)... cute response.. 10+

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