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"Is there a future for us?"
  by shawn da 1


I'm on my knees because the pressure won't allow me stand,

I decided to wait for love and now a new chapter has began,

An Infatuation with your body plus a fascination for your mind,

Could my feelings grow is the question and the answer will come with time,

Pain from my past leads me to think,

If I give into my thoughts what we have will undoubtedly shrink,

I told you I trust you so I pray you won't cross the line,

From your smile to your laugh I'm glad 2 say my baby is fine,

Though looks are overrated because they do diminish with time,

I want something real and true in life......at least one time,

I can't see the future but I can see the steps on my path,

If you still see the potential I'll be glad to cross your path,

I'm full of flaws I strive to correct every day but I'm only a man,

From Ornithophobia to Philophobia...overcoming them...I think we can,

Since you are...my girl...and I am...your man,
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Date Submitted: Aug 27, 2008 (01:42 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/27/08 (02:23 AM)
Author: shawn da 1
Poem Title: Hell Naw

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comment icon  COMMENTS (2)
  CC Miller
08/29/08 (01:35 PM) 
Good use of alliteration in "pain from my past". Nice rhythm too.

  SWEETYV
08/27/08 (01:51 PM) 
thats really beautiful my nigga

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