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"ITS ALL MY FAULT....."
  by LakotaPoet12


This is how the story goes……

You told me you loved me
I just stood there
You said you missed me from being way of there
I just stood there
You said you wished we were together
And….well I just stood there

I told you I loved you
You nodded and stared
I told you I missed you
You just nodded and stared
I told you we couldn’t be together
And well you just stood there

5 months went by and we still talk
But, its different now….
You say your still in love with me
But, you hurt me

Last night we were talking
And you got quiet
I asked you what was wrong
And you said im gonna do it
I said do what?

You hung up the phone
And that’s all that was too it

10 minutes later…

I got a call!

“is Samantha there”

“your speaking to her”

They said “ we got some bad news to tell you”

I asked what is it?

They said you hung yourself
And I guess I had something to do with it…

They found a note saying…

All I tried to do is love her
And my love obviously aint good enough
I hurt her in wayz I will never forget

Samantha all I wanted to do
Was give you the world
How come my love wasn’t good enough?

Well it to late now…
Im prolly gone right now
While your reading this note
That I sent to you..

I loved you that’s a know fact…

Silence grew in the room
My hands made there way up to my face
I fell to my knees
I begin to sob…

I ran to my room
I grabbed the pictures of you
I sat on the floor

Wonderin what the hell am I too do?
Its my fault
Its my fault
Its my fault!!!!

I took some pills from the bathroom sink
Layed on my bed
And slowly fell asleep
Hopin I was dreamin when I awake

But, I slowly drifted away
And It wasn’t no damn deep sleep
I felt my body slowly givin in

Pictures of you went dim…..
Pictures of us started to fit in

But, I never woke up….
Its all my fault…
All my fault
All my fault…..
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Date Submitted: Oct 24, 2007 (12:46 PM)
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  Shanta`
02/24/09 (02:52 AM) 
Im loving this ...it was so embraced by my thoughts ...good work ...loved the conversation felt as if I was there deep imagery ...

  poetrys poet
06/05/08 (05:50 PM) 
aye it wsnt yo fault ma dont think dat but good azz write dimin dis one

  popicree
04/17/08 (12:21 AM) 
DAM GIRL IM GETEN CHILLS READING THIS GODO WRITE VERY DEEP AND HEART FELT EXPERSIONS BUT TA CANT BLAME YOURSELF FOR SOMEONE ELSES PAINS.. ,,1O, MAH

  Mojo JoJo
01/15/08 (05:03 AM) 
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! this is intense but you can not blame yourself just like everybody else has said you dont control anyone except for yourself bad things happen that are beyond your control but dont blame yourself keep your head up and be strong 10strz great write

  NATiVELAyDEE
01/15/08 (04:47 AM) 
OH MY G0D MAMAz THiS SHiTS HELLA SAD.. BUT G00D... GOD... YOUR AMAZiNG

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