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"I'VE NOTICED YOUR CONFUSED"
  by le-nae


I FEEL MY HEARTS ON A LINE
YOU SAY IM YOUR EVERYTHING
THEN YOU HAVE A CHANGE OF MIND

SO I'VE NOTICED YOUR CONFUSED
MY HEARTS BEING PUT TO USE
SO I MUST PUT ON MY NIKE SHOES
IM GONNA TAKE A BOX OF TISSUES
AND CRY OUT ALL MY ISSUES
BUT IT WOULDN'T MATTER IF U LEAVE
CAUSE I'LL MISS YOU
YOU SAY I'M YOUR WORLD
I REALLY THOUGHT I WAS YOUR PEARL
SOMETHING LIKE YOUR FAVORITE GIRL
BUT I GUESS YOUR HEART IS SOME WHERE ELSE

I'VE NOTICED YOUR CONFUSED
I THOUGHT WE SHARED A CONNECTION
LIKE AT&T I FEEL THE BREAKAGE
ARE YOU THERE... ARE YOU THERE
I NEVER FELT THIS SCARED
WE NEED TIME TO THINK
BUT IF I SAY GOODBYE I KNOW YOU'LL LEAVE MY SIDE
FOREVER
THATS SOMETHING I DONT WANT BABE
NEVER
THE FEELING I GET INSIDE
ITS NEVER BEEN SO CLEVER
SOMETHING SO DEEP
GOT ME UP AT WEE HOURS JUST CAN'T SLEEP

I FEEL YOUR CONFUSION
BEEN THERE BEFORE
YOUR FIRST LOVE IS THE HARDEST
BUT MY LOVE IS THE STRONGEST
NOT TO SOUND CRUEL
BUT DEMOND IF YOU RUN BACK TO HER
BABY YOU WOULD BE A FOOL

I'VE NOTICED YOUR CONFUSED
BUT YOUR LOVE IS WORTH MORE
THAN JUST TO BE USED
YOU ARE MY EVEYTHING
AND JUST TO KEEP FROM LOOSING YOU BOY
I'D DO ANYTHING
JUST LET ME SHOW YOU
THAT THS IS REAL AND I'D NEVER HURT YOU
BREAK YOUR HEART OR LIE
'CUZ YOU ARE HE PERFECT GUY
SO HOLD YOUR HEAD HIGH
AND DONT LET YOUR FIRST LOVE COME BETWEEN YOU AND I

I'VE NOTICED YOUR CONFUSED
BUT PUT YOUR HEART IN MY HAND
IT WOULD NEVER BE USED
IT WOULD BE BLESSED LIKE THE NEVERLANDS

.....DECATED TO DEMOND D'VONTE MOORE
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Date Submitted: Jul 01, 2009 (08:01 AM)
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  tamiah
07/01/09 (12:01 PM) 
Awwwzz...this is so sweet. I love the rhythm in this poem and the vocabulary usuage in this was wonderful. I can totally relate and was in this situation not too long ago as a matter fact, Great description...10starrzz.....

  big josh
07/01/09 (08:18 AM) 
this was a nice dedication young one, nicely done :)

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