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"J on the Bass"
  by Embonpoint


His intense long glare penetrated and captivated
His strong presence commanded my complete attention
He looked into my eyes and began gently strumming

I could feel the heat rising as he carefully placed his fingers
His passion transformed me to another place
His groove had my whole body humming

He closed his eyes moved his body in passionate thrusts
As he strategically fingered, strummed, and stroked
Beautiful sounds escaped into the atmosphere

As he went at it harder and harder I took him in deeper and deeper
Hearts pounding, body temperature elevated, crying our screams of praise
Increased anticipation as climax was near

Releasing that final long, hard stroke
His body falls into complete relaxation
He looks out into the crowd satisfied . . . applause fills the air
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Date Submitted: Mar 22, 2009 (11:13 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 04/15/09 (12:30 AM)
Author: Poetry Love
Poem Title: A Groove Thang Baby

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comment icon  COMMENTS (11)
  lady
09/24/09 (01:41 AM) 
dAMN, I THOUGHT I WAS READING ABOUT SEX! LOL I think my head was in the gutter on this one. you took me to a whole diff place. I liked it tho. nice write:)

  Ladyoflyrics
06/12/09 (04:05 AM) 
lol..profound...poetically written to give a hidden message...perfect...

  ButterflyDream
05/31/09 (11:36 PM) 
wow...lady you managed to pull us into atmospheres at once...lol.This was def a jazz performance that I need to witness!lol

  Diemenz
05/05/09 (10:10 PM) 
ur a mess

  Tragic
05/01/09 (08:01 PM) 
lol r u sure this aint sex rofl, lol loved the erotic feel to this -10

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