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"jackson"
  by PnutButta


:::ForJackson:::

I apologize cause I did'nt realize the depths of your true emotions.
You painted me a picture
so vidid and descriptive
and i obliviously looked you over.
what can I say?
what should I say?
back then you where a million miles away or least it seemed.
I was young in body and mind
I had no idea that I was being so blind...
I guess we'll never know and the memories will haunt me from time to time.
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Date Submitted: May 23, 2008 (03:37 PM)
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  Jonathan Robin...
06/03/08 (10:01 PM) 
WOW! Definitely devoted to this piece...recognizing the strength and weakness of what hearts are made of. Great job!

  KiNg-Go0B3r
05/25/08 (02:50 AM) 
dayuum jackson should b feelin this wrte this was cooool 10 starz ya diiig

  b3yond r3d3mpt...
05/25/08 (02:43 AM) 
this one was a hott scribe for the first read i did on urs i hada swing thru adn return you some love for peeping out mah earlier peice love returned

  T.R.I.G.G.U.S.
05/24/08 (11:02 AM) 
for the simple fact my last name is jackson this definately caught my eye. a lot of emotions poured out. its amazing what time can do. when you look back on things you didn't look at present time, you see them in an altered light. scary feelings of the "what if" and what could have been. good drop.

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