wow....another piece well written shawty....i kan tell ur real gud at writin bout loved based eventz in ur poetry.....especially on dis 1....*your a skeleton woman looking 4 flesh*....i wish somebody would tell me dat aint poetry rite dere...datz beautiful....even if da situation u wrote about on here aint da best in da world....da wordz of da situation makez da readerz urging 4 more of yo testimonies in all of your writez...but newayz shawty...dis iz a 10 4rm me 4asho...stay up and keep pushin ...
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wow....another piece well written shawty....i kan tell ur real gud at writin bout loved based eventz in ur poetry.....especially on dis 1....*your a skeleton woman looking 4 flesh*....i wish somebody would tell me dat aint poetry rite dere...datz beautiful....even if da situation u wrote about on here aint da best in da world....da wordz of da situation makez da readerz urging 4 more of yo testimonies in all of your writez...but newayz shawty...dis iz a 10 4rm me 4asho...stay up and keep pushin da pen...ghost...~*N-Love*~
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woo....the ending had me like damn.....Skeleton woman huh? this had some sick lines 2 it..and great expression...so am i 2 believe u don't believe in love? or just don't believe u can?....that's kinda what i got from this piece...that u hide behind ur mask's of Defense not allowing urself 2 become "weak" as u said 2 the vunerability of love's lust...overcomin even the strongest...but it doesn't make u weak..it makes u human...more so it makes u strong becuz 2 be strong is 2 admit u can be weak.....
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woo....the ending had me like damn.....Skeleton woman huh? this had some sick lines 2 it..and great expression...so am i 2 believe u don't believe in love? or just don't believe u can?....that's kinda what i got from this piece...that u hide behind ur mask's of Defense not allowing urself 2 become "weak" as u said 2 the vunerability of love's lust...overcomin even the strongest...but it doesn't make u weak..it makes u human...more so it makes u strong becuz 2 be strong is 2 admit u can be weak..4 someone...and need...that's just my opinion doe...so....either way loved this 1...nice 1 2 end on 4 me...gave me a thrist 4 more... J.
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