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"jamal (pt 1)"
  by jadakiss


we walk after we crawl , so we basically rise to fall
take jamal ...he studied law..went to college an all

graduated ...now his lyfe iz nice ...NOPE
all he dealz wit iz bigmackz n coke

he dont work wit fast food
he just makes sure packz move

hiz momz stay trippin
but he carry da chrome 38 long nose like pippen

sometimez he make $100 a day , or 1G a week
he alwayz say "da crack headz are my boss, cause dey da onez payin me"

and he say " i got a shotgun longer than shaq's legz, leave em stiff like statues...one shot look like i'm throwin shaq @ you"

jamal was alwayz stoppin thru da hood givin kidz money
and just askin what's good

itz crazy how pplz kidz waz callin him daddy
he went to kidz graduationz and all dat, just to make them happy

he alwayz told them "never wish to be like me, do the right thing like spike lee"
"go to school, get a degree....and when i get old TAKE CARE OF ME" (lol)

kidz leave their crib cause their moms sendin them out to cop a pound
then they get jumped cause "nothin in America is free" and feindz dont wanna pay the fee

and when da kidz go home brusied and battered wit no drugz in hand
their moms iz ready to spazz ....even if it was a gram

they sacrifice their child's life...just to hit the pipe.......(to be continued)
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Date Submitted: Mar 18, 2007 (02:28 PM)
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  Poetik assasin
04/22/09 (04:31 PM) 
respect m'lady. you are on your game

  teedaboo
04/21/09 (02:48 PM) 
THAT SHYT GOOD HARD ASS HELL WE NEED TO COLAB LIKE FOREAL BUT YOU KNOW YOU NEED TO GET AT MY POEMS AND WHAT NO YOUR STUFF RITE HERE IS MAD SICK DUDE LIKE I CAN READ IT OVER AND OVER THATS MAD DOPE DUDE IM LIKE FEELING IT ALL OVA AND WAT NOT KEEP UP DA GOOD WRK MA CUZ U GOIN PLACES WITH THAT ONE

  dbomb
04/20/09 (02:11 PM) 
dats tru spit rite dere cause i got a brother that u jus described first hand an his name is actually jamal

  big josh
02/17/09 (10:46 PM) 
damn shorty u always kill it , i like dis joint

  JWhitted
02/17/09 (08:16 PM) 
Man I'm vibin hard as hell off dis.... Cant say dat i relate fully, but the poem certainly held some truth... Society works in ways we dont understand.... The risk people are willing to put others thru in order for self satisfaction is limitless.... Good write though.... 10 stars

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