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"Judgement Gone Wrong"
  by LadiiPoetrii
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Concealed Fury by PoeticSoulja


Why cant i be accepted for who i really am?
Why do people want to jugde me just becuz im different?
Judgement Gone Wrong

I thought bout taking care of those to choice to judge
But they arent worth the bullets i carry
Cant they see that judgement is killing me

I cant take it anymore, I have to confessed then leave
I love my mother with all my heart
But i cant go on lying about my life
My friend know sumthing is different
My family knows i am depressed

Is this really me?
Am i reall a homo?
I havent been sure why i wasnt really interested in female until now

Peple start looking at me weird
Treatin me different
Just becuz I have confessed my sexuality

I cant take the judgement anymore
Im done with this life
Be sure to tell my Mother I love Her and I didnt
Want to hurt her by all the judgement that i have been going thru

This is the end for me
the price of judgement will drive people to committ
Sudice or to take the lives of othres
Judgement Gone Worng
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Date Submitted: Dec 15, 2007 (10:16 PM)
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  Mojo JoJo
12/17/07 (02:02 AM) 
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is kind of crazy for real I a def. not a homo but for real this is fucked up that people do judge people because they are different...... especially when it causes them enough pain to want to end their life thats really fucked up Strong Write 10strz to this response

  Nephew
12/15/07 (10:41 PM) 
damn dat wuz a kkold piece 10'*z

  LadiiPoetrii
12/15/07 (10:31 PM) 
this poem is a dudes point of view on judgement gone wrong

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