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"Just a lil taste..."
  by Lil Mamma Rena
  - This Poem is a response to the poem My story to tell by Chainz.


I’ve been through hell and back,
But now I feel it’s time to get me back on track.
Sometimes I speak with my eyes,
Cause the sound of goodbye makes me cry!
Success…I want it!

I want to breath it like a breathe of fresh air.
I want to taste it like it’s in power of my taste buds.
I day dream of her so much…
I swear success…has the best touch!

Being on welfare….damn it sucks!
But I ride it out…cause soon enough we wont have to ask the cost.
Story of My life,
Hustling day and night.
To bring home stake,
Fuck bacon!
Three course meals, buffet and all the food you can eat.

I stood alone with family on my left and friends on my right.
But they are in the distance.
It’s just me standing here in front of you.
All I am, all I can be and all I want to be! (for Now)
Feeling of hatred and jealousy,
Coming from the closest parts of me!

One thing I got to say is never lend your shoes out,
Cause some people may crumble with the hands you were dealt.
And how will you do what you are suppose to,
If someone else is walking in your shoes/

Just tilt your fitted cap,
or let your hair out.
Relax, breath in and taste success!
Hear her softly whisper your name.
Feel her breathing on your neck.
See it in your future, nothing more nothing less and hold on to it!
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Date Submitted: Sep 27, 2009 (08:47 PM)
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  (Floetic~One) ...
09/30/09 (02:32 AM) 
wow your flow iz dope on this piece... wonderful talent with the pen... keep that ink flowing.

  Μz Ρ...
09/29/09 (01:35 PM) 
Wow .. Passionate scribe lady .. I want more ..please this was a lil taste for real .. but it was Good

  mizemotion
09/28/09 (11:15 PM) 
hahaha "To bring some stake fuck bacon"...lol @ that line...dude this is fucken beautiful wrote with powerful emotions and what not...lolz...Fire I totally agree with G.A...n dat boy still has yet to show up in the discussion forums...lolz...

  G.A.
09/28/09 (05:50 PM) 
FIRE!!!! didn't know you had this kind of talent in you i mean i knew you can write but this drop was blazing....!!!

  Chainz.
09/27/09 (08:56 PM) 
daaaaaaaaamn u went off this was dope im gonna favorite this nice write

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