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"JUST A RESPONSE: MISTAKES"
  by D1Uadore305


Nothing you did was a mistake.
Being in a relationship head first
was not a mistake
Trusting your lil lady
was not a mistake
Your lil lady cheating on you
was a mistake
But guess what?
Everyone makes mistakes
What matters is the lessons learned and
us not repeating the mistake
If your lil lady is the ONLY famale you want then
dont lose her over one mistake
Just know that your not being played
and that
Its her you love and not love
People seem to love love
Even though love hates us.
All in All
I mean what I say
And what I say is what I feel
I LOVE YOU
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Date Submitted: Feb 03, 2009 (11:20 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 02/04/09 (11:43 PM)
Author: Poetical Attacker
Poem Title: Never Again

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comment icon  COMMENTS (24)
  angeleyes1
11/04/09 (11:36 PM) 
wow very nicely written I feel you on this one keep them words flowing much love

  Sentinal
02/23/09 (06:16 PM) 
"People seem to love love Even though love hates us." Damn I like those lines. And like you, I believe in second chances if you're willing to give people that chance. 10s

  Lique
02/23/09 (06:11 PM) 
i don't thinkyou understand the impact of one of your lines...people seem to love love...we are so in love with the idea of love that we fall hard when we feel it the slightest and some take it for granted and some hold tight and really embrace it for what it really is...once again...not what i'd call deep poetry but you have philosophies in here i don't think you recognized

  Kirby
02/23/09 (05:55 PM) 
"people seem to love love even thoug love seems to hate us" ..... I love that quote......very nice response

  SmAsH/BaByFaCe
02/19/09 (12:22 AM) 
Good write. Spoken like you been thru your fare share of relationship issues or so. 10 STARZ!

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