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"Just Actin Dumb"
  by *BMORES FINEST*


1,2,3,4 aiming at your doem
better roam along home boy you aint grown
5,6,7,8 aiming at your face
naw it aint mase
let you get taste whats hanging on my waste
squash your punk ass just like a grape
what you gonna do when i come for you
pull my tool and snatch your jewels
fuck ya gang and fuck ya crew
cheating nigga yea i dont play by the rules
play no way thats a childish game
wanna play a game go play rayman
make you feel sour like a sweat tart
boy if your smart youll run before i rip you apart
limb from limb and stop you in sum timbs
you think this a joke nigga hand me the rope
ok now im geekin lemme stop the hokes.....lol
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Date Submitted: Jan 19, 2009 (07:43 PM)
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  misses fowetry
05/21/09 (12:55 AM) 
(lol) Damn Hot Write this was some go hard type poem (lol) Flow was

  blakkrose
05/17/09 (08:29 PM) 
lmao I love this piece.it's creative and was just fun to read.

  t-shy
01/20/09 (11:51 AM) 
A LIL VIOLENT BUT I FEEL IT THO!!!

  Jedi Johnson
01/19/09 (11:31 PM) 
Dimed Stars...this is very Real..Street

  singfield
01/19/09 (08:52 PM) 
so violent but iI liike iit...u get 10 *z 4rom me...keep up da good work

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