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"just anotha ho in a wedding dress"
  by poeticfrost


look at you
hair all fixed
white dress all crisp
they snappin yo pic
but underneath it all
you still a ho
you don't deserve
to wear white
that's my life
you stealin
why is it that
virgins sit home alone
while nasty a$$ hos
are seated on thrones
being fed wedding cake
by our prince charmings
the irony more than alarming
well, you know what?
you can have him
cuz he ain't worthy of me
don't get it twisted
i'm not conceited
just speaking truthfully
you could never
compare to me
my chest is heated
wanna slap you repeatedly
for stealin my bestfriend
takin him to your bed
worming your way in
rotting the apple of my eye
but instead i'll sit home alone
and cry
haunted by that damn
wedding march music
and how hos like you
abuse it
-dawn m frost
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Date Submitted: May 07, 2007 (05:11 AM)
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  Sir Grth
11/13/07 (02:07 PM) 
I forgot to directly comment on the poem.........It is strong and powerfully stated how you feel. Job well done. Keep on preachin and teachin.

  Sir Grth
11/13/07 (02:04 PM) 
As A man Of retierd ho'ish ways I can really feel your frustrations. It seems that now I have matured and demand somthing more out of a woman other than her body,That thats all these women want to give. I dont get it. Sex Is such a precious thing. To just spread it like corn seed is such a sad and lost way to live.

  candy-b
08/29/07 (07:17 AM) 
real talk on this one

  lilneph
05/16/07 (11:26 PM) 
yo I feel u MS.Dawn Frost

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