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"JUST AS GOOD AS ME(LOVE/EROTIC)"
  by Drea s


SOMETIMES WHEN WE MAKE LOVE I CRY
NOT BECAUSE ITS JUST THAT PASSIONATE BUT
BECAUSE I OFTEN WONDER DOES HE MAKE HER
FEEL AS GOOD AS HE MAKES ME......

DOES HE MAKE HER
GRIP THE SHEETS
EMOTIONALLY
GROW WEAK
JUST AS HE
MAKES ME

DOES HE MAKE HER SCREAM HIS NAME
EVERYTIME HE HITS THAT SPOT
MAKE HER GO INSANE
EVERYTIME HE BOTTOMS OUT

DOES HE MAKE HER BREATHLESS
WHEN HE KISSES HER BELOW HER NAVEL
DOES SHE BLACK OUT
AND BECOME PHYSICALLY UNSTABLE

DOES SHE CLIMAX
BACK TO BACK WHE HE HITS IT DOGGYSTYLE
DOES SHE LEAVE PASSION MARKS ON HIS BACK AND
WHEN HE SWITCHES TO MISSIONARY DOES IT DRIVE HER WILD

DOES SHE WHISPER IN HIS EAR I LOVE YOU
OVER AND OVER AS HE SLOWLY MAKES LOVE TO HER
AND DOES SHE CRY WHEN HE CLIMAXES BECAUSE
SHE KNOWS HE MAKES ME FEEL JUST AS GOOD AS HE MAKES HER
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Date Submitted: Jul 20, 2009 (02:10 PM)
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  MR. BYRD
07/25/09 (11:10 PM) 
hmm..I wonder if this is true....I'm feeling this, your thoughts are racing when you making love to this dude....the concept was nice..push that pen

  cool_lik_nikki
07/25/09 (02:05 AM) 
oh my! This piece right here is definitely going down as a fav! I love it and could once so relate to it. You've mastered with the imagery in this one, hun! Great job!

  monica
07/23/09 (02:25 AM) 
I AGREE WIT B.ROSE I LOVE THE IMAGERY SUPER SEXI AND I LOVE THE WHOLE FLOW OF THIS POEM

  B. Rose
07/20/09 (02:22 PM) 
Sexy imagery.... im feeling this...

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