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"Just Friends…I don’t need another Friend……"
  by GrimReaper
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Just Friends by Lady_Style


your legs, your lips, your touch,
your eyes don’t say no,
when your legs are firmly wrapped
around my back & you pulling me
deeper & your lips mumbles &
utters words i’d heard before,
telling me deeper,
body earth quaking as i
slam into you the heavy
erection, while you
moan………

Just Friends……..

did you think about that
when my tongue was down your
throat, when tongue was deep
in between your sugary walls,
sucking your juices down my
throat, no i just heard the sweet
sound of your voice screaming
loudly for more & i hit deeper
into your sweets, giving me
toothaches & hurting you
so good….

Just Friends Right…….

i never heard you once say
“no” don’t make my body
clinch up, goose bump with
chills of sweat running across
your body, when you met
multiples of climax, i heard
you call out for more, mumbles
& gibbering while your climax
multiplied times itself, legs
locking, fingers at my waist
holding me in as you explode…

Just Friends……

mixed messages your
sending me, you don’t want this
heavy erection in you, “fine”
i have gone my separate way
before, heartbroken, it’ll last
temporarily, i had love for
no longer will i love another,
it was you that my heart belong
too, the love making was
a bonus, our bodies connected
on a spiritual level, your creamy
sweets all over my weight was
just the tip of the iceberg,
heaven would have been
yours, all that talk about
wanting someone that was
wanting to be true to you,
star crossed no longer,
fuck love if it means i can’t
have you, i don’t need a friend…..

By Grim
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Date Submitted: Nov 03, 2009 (11:24 AM)
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  Lyrical Dragon
11/13/09 (10:05 AM) 
woah that's some deep shit ... tell it how it is !! nice write

  tngrl
11/13/09 (09:46 AM) 
oh snap! ha ha ha... this got me thinking bout my BFF.. he gonna LOVE this one! (im totaly sending him a link) this was hot and sooooooo damn true baby! GREAT WRITE!!!

  คว...
11/09/09 (09:25 AM) 
i think youu truly captures the emotional chaos that goes along with this type of situation....and penned it perfectly from a mans perspective...great response

  Athena317
11/03/09 (11:33 AM) 
oooh yes, mixed messages, come fuck me, but we're just friends w/ benefits... nailed it Grim!

  Lady_Style
11/03/09 (11:28 AM) 
Wow! Easy tiger...lmao...I absolutely love this piece...gettin a lil freaky yet still showin the emotional side of bein "jus friends"...Great response hun! xx

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