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"Just How It Is"
  by Bratt


Few months has past,
Yet im still in a gasp,
Can't believe wat i got infront of me
isn't or wasnt masked,
Its just so real.
Us being together,
we dealing in deal or no deal,
You are my asylum,
I went insane,
You are my lung transplant,
let me breath and let life be gained,
When im with you the world just stops
and im washed over with tranquility,
He is him ,
and i am me,
we are inevitable,
practicing habitually.
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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2009 (12:26 PM)
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  Greg Gatsby
07/16/09 (01:22 PM) 
hey this was real creative and smooth. very well put

  Zanay
07/16/09 (12:59 PM) 
I like this poem...it was soft and sweet. I can tell you have a sweet soul

  CCD
07/16/09 (12:40 PM) 
It has a nice soft tone to it you know a little jazz play in the background as it read..I really like your word usage and placement. This is a vry good write.

  Duice
07/16/09 (12:36 PM) 
*Soft sigh* nice scribe, very flowing and emotional... nice use of metaphors too - run with that in the future.

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