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"..."just love"..."
  by Nilla


they say that we won't last.
that we called ourselves fallin' in love too fast.
but, really, they don't know what ya lips feel like when they touch mine.
they know the feeling i getz when you control my spine.
or the warmth in my heart when you say those three lil' words.
i cherish everything i've heard,
everything i've seen.
and contrary to our bad days, i getz treated like a queen.
you put smiles on my face,
and fillz up an empty space.

♥forgive me if i'M not listenin', i'M in love
with somethin' i can't get enuff of ♥

they say that we won't last -
in fact, just look at our pasts.
but they weren't there when you saved my life
when i slit my wrists because of a heart full of strife.
they didn't feel the way you took all the pain away
just by knowing just what to say.
they don't feel how heavy my heart is
when i think the thought "what if i wasn't his".
and that's why they can't matter.
fuck how -they- feel, without you my life is like a tea party with the Mad Hatter.

♥..you complete me.
and this love has been constructed imperfect but just beautifully.
so their words fall to deaf ears,
and i'M gonna continue to do what my heart hears..♥

♥ and my heart hears..*exhales* "just love" ♥
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Date Submitted: May 29, 2008 (05:16 AM)
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  S.O.G.
06/16/08 (09:58 PM) 
Nilla, my fellow poet, you inspire poeple with your beautiful romance poems, these are the kind of poems that when you read them, that just make you feel good, make you happy, places a smile on your face, such a warmth of love, wow such a feeling. another truly great write honey

  J. Hill
05/29/08 (05:13 PM) 
aww i love this poem so much and i defenitly can relate this is soo my new favorite poem

  Shadow
05/29/08 (12:37 PM) 
"and this love has been constructed imperfect but just beautifully." and that was written perfectly! love that line the most out of this who piece because it spoke volumes. this was a lovely write Nillz....keep ya pen moving ma. *smiles* and keep your heart loving.

  Nikkz iZ DONE....
05/29/08 (11:48 AM) 
Man love...people kill me talkin about stuff they know nothing about...Pshh...jus haters basically jealous of you got have && what they dfon`t yanno...i hate that shit...HmmmmZ...i think so...but yea Nii`...i was defiantley feelin this one mama

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
05/29/08 (08:19 AM) 
man Nilla, you must really be in love. . . cause you are writting some serious things lately.. but i love'em

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