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"Keep it on the down low"
  by LAB **Ms. Cool Whip**
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I Want Cha' Baby by *Tha Scorpion*


Puckered up glossy lips
to kiss the softness of yours,
I..
believe its time to make myself known

to those..
and baby...
even you

I dont believe you forgot,
I just dont think you ever really knew,

Its all about competition,
and I dont wanna win,
I just wanna leave an impression,

competition is something I dont wanna deal with,
so take fresh pussy or suffer a stale dick...


YOU FEEL ME??


Its been a while,
Mr. Crown Royal

Mr.
I dont give a damn cuz I dont want'cha problems,
just wanna give a euforic way to feel like Ive solved them,

maximum 24 four hours.. (LOL!)

Combining saxophone chimes and champagne wining,
just...

ask me to dance one time and...
look deep in my
hazel eyes..

put a grip on my hips,
almost like the feeling of being 25

You know what Im sayin???

No need to be your wife, or your
long term stay in,

Gimme a reason to feel prissy,
Like Im so hard
I dont really wanna give you the pussy,


ooh,... maybe thats harsh!

sounds almost like what every other woman
thinks to herself in the dark,

Im the one to abuse it,
no secret message, you know my number
you should use it,

this is not personal
this is on

"some dude shit"...

Ya understand?

Get back to ya life,
cuz I know I AM...

but Im curious....

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Date Submitted: Sep 07, 2009 (12:36 AM)
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  *Tha Scorpion*
09/08/09 (10:05 AM) 
Ewwww, you came wit some serious heat baby, from start to finish this was ill nana sexy indeed!!

  Blayzn 10
09/07/09 (02:10 PM) 
LOL, hot response!! I am SURE Scorp will come back with something too! Nice drop!

  Isis sun
09/07/09 (11:40 AM) 
:) You always bring it...

  H.H. Holloway
09/07/09 (02:09 AM) 
(((laughing))) you know, I had a decent response for this, in my head, but I think Scorp will do better, so I'll let you wait for him... (((laughing)))

  MzSpoon aka "T...
09/07/09 (01:35 AM) 
Whip is in the mofo building! I'm not playing with you tonight.

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