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"kill myself?"
  by man:man


- I cant predict the future, i cant erase the past. So I'm stuck in every hour living off experiences i've had. Me an "life" kinda friends, when i see'm we be dappin up, Den it piss me off, so if morning come we gone be scrappin up. "Life" pissin me off, I'm about ta say some things ion wanna say. Now my gun to his head, i'm about to take my life away. "life" i thought we was cool, we hommies right? but how can that be, when we find ourselves at this same point every night. So wy you keep hurtin me, dont answer, just let me do this,cause i know watever you bout to say gone hurt me more cause you looking clueless. "Life", look at my face, cant chu see my pain? But you smile when we around other people like everything is the same. "Life" i remember when we was young, burning ants to kill time, "Life" remember thru you is how i learned i could rhyme. "Life" ion wanna shoot chu, cause my next best friend is death, an ion like him cause he on listen to how i feel or either he just def. A an he be zonin me out, just starin at me wit a stale face, an at my nigga's funerals he passin out invites to that hell place. "Life" you brought me thru some thangs, thanks fa stayin by myside, even wen i forgot about you an in myself built pride. So ima put my gun away, an pray we don get here again, Cause when it comes down to it, your the one i'm livin in:
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Date Submitted: Nov 12, 2008 (09:27 PM)
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  jus lyk dat
03/24/09 (09:44 PM) 
dis is STRAIGHT UP DIPSET!! i lyk how yooh compared lyfe ta it bein ya hommie dats waz real critical thinkin but i get dis mood sumtimes i jus didnt kno how ta put it but yooh hit it on point!!!:) 10 starZ!!

  koolaiid
11/29/08 (10:01 PM) 
this is hott. i b feeln like this at all tha time and still do. ima get it ova it soon tho. but i love yo concept and how u used life as yo friend. this is super hott.

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