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"Killing me soflty"
  by NICKY BOO


*cant even speak right now, your killing me softly*

I guess it is easy to blame me, and stay upset with me,
Little do you know while were on the phone, your killing me softly,
When was the last time you said you loved me?
It hurts sometimes you know,
Its killing me softly,
You are my breath, my rain and my light,
Its obvious when your mad at me,
Your whole tone changes, and you get quiet as if you dont wanna speak to me,
I can feel the vibe, the tension is too strong,
I must hang up right now because I cant feel this for too long,
click
I hang up the phone, crying, tear after tear,
You forget almost everyday that losing you is my fear,
A sensitive fragile heart like mine,
Its hard to take in some of the things you say to me inside.
Baby i'll get on bending knee, im not too proud to beg,
I love you with all my heart shouldnt that be enough said?


*Killing me softly when we dont communicate the way we should, my silent cry lives on*
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Date Submitted: Sep 21, 2008 (04:59 PM)
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  Rissa14
10/19/08 (02:39 PM) 
yehh im definitely feeling this piece. i know what you mean..sometimes we just gotta speak up and let the people who are hurting us know. did you show the person, whoever it might be this poem? wow. i like this one..and i can definitely relate. amazing poet. ten stars. xoxo ♥Rissa

  the struggle
10/07/08 (11:46 PM) 
Dang ma..."I love you with all my heart shouldn't that be enough said?" yeah, it should...

  Chocolate City
09/23/08 (08:19 PM) 
okay okay Nicky.. this is a nice piece.. im feeling it.. i like how u put it together.. i like the concept.. killing me softly...

  Dawn
09/23/08 (08:49 AM) 
Nice write..Ya I love my honey with all my heart...communication is key to any healthy relationship..you can't have a progressing relationship with out...one love sis

  bookum
09/23/08 (12:23 AM) 
nice write cakes....u always write with alot of emotion..and im sorry you feeling this...maybe you should let me...i mean him know hw u feel bay...keep em comin tho.

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