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"Killing Me Softly"
  by "Hollywood"


My baby is fine....perfect in everway to me....
His love is sweet...better than any of the world's finest candy.

There's only one concern....some people may think that it ain't much....
But he's killing me softly with just one touch.

No one has ever had such power over my heart and it scares me sometimes....
Missing you at every second....craving for you scent....yeah..I'm guilty of such crimes.

There's only one concern....now this one some people may miss....
But he's killing me softly with just one kiss.

I've never loved as emotional....hard....and deep as I do for this one man....
Through thick and thin....rain and sunshine....I'm going to forever be his number one fan.

There's only one concern....and most people search for this type of thing in a book....
But he's killing me softly with just one look.

His fingers all over my body caressing my tender spots always does the trick....
And oooooooooooooh yeah my baby....he definitely has got the magic stick!

There's only one concern....and most people may mistake my ogasmic moans for pleading cries....
But he's killing me softly right between my thighs.

If by any chance you feel the need to interfere......please don't try and rescue me....
He can use all the knives of love.....guns of orgasms....or beat it til it turns raw....just let me be.

There's only one concern....and most people will never get it or understand....
But I simply LOVE it when I'm being killed softly....especially when it's by my man.
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Date Submitted: Sep 18, 2007 (11:06 PM)
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  A.Renee
11/10/08 (03:54 PM) 
wow, this a good write, it was very lovely, 10 stars

  XPERIENCE
10/02/07 (01:50 PM) 
i love the repetition of the line killing me softly.. it truly adds to this poem.. this is a hot joint... sighs**** i miss my baby.. hes always killing me softly

  SlimCutta
09/22/07 (03:23 PM) 
This is a beautiful poem..you expressed it nicely and you had a great way of showing your love for you man..this is whats up buddy..keep it flowing.

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