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"KISS"
  by Reminisce


His sweet lips graze teasingly across my lips
I fill freely with butterflies and optimist
As thoughts of love in my mind create sensations of bliss
Left with only traces of his cologne to REMINISCE
Just to kiss his lips….
He compliments my curves perfectly as he pulls closer against my hips
I think I’m in love, but I’m willing to risk
Just to intertwine with his love is my heartfelt wish
Rushing renegades of emotions take over in clips,
I have never known a love so real like this….
I have never known “IN LOVE” really DID exist,
All my prior run-ins with cupid were meaningLESS,
Now I’m truly high strung in love and I’m feeling it,
I’m “ADDICTED” to him……
Pursuing his heart and relighting his soul with diligence,
It’s my one and ultimate goal to represent as his,
It would be an honor to win his heart and be called his MISS,
Enjoying every beat of his heart as love flourishes,
YES! I treasure this,
The joy of loving him,
Emotions expressed freely through written script,
He’s the reason why I’m writing this,
just to think this all started with a grazing kiss…

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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (06:26 PM)
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  Hank
07/05/09 (12:21 PM) 
Excellent opening and closing!! I love how you brought it back home with the same opening line. You are something else you know that? 10 starz boo...Great job!!

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07/04/09 (08:10 PM) 
Wow....beautiful Piece of Passion and Intensity...yes a kiss is such a beautiful thing...it emitt's this Uphoric Bliss as u spoke and is very addicting cuz more so it's who does it...how they do it...and how it makes u feel..and it was put 2gether flawlessly in this piece...Great Scribe queen i loved the Imagery and depth u put into this...how u spoke of the lip's and the senstation's...beautiful description...it's a fav. J.

  MR. BYRD
07/04/09 (07:43 PM) 
hmmm...intresting piece here..."I fill freely with butterflies and optimist, As thoughts of love in my mind create sensations of bliss"------now that right there says it all...love it from beginning to end, keep it up beautiful poet :)

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