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"Kissed By The Sun: Poem # 25"
  by Brokenvegtable


The Sun has come out
And I bath in its warmth
As I feel from it
The love that is of such a life giver
Her
Love
She
Gives
To
Me
I feel it surround me
Fill me
Take me away from Earth
As she is the Sun
That I want to love
Cause I know she makes me feel loved

Kissed by the heart felt emotions
Her children
Taken from her own heart
They beat
She beats
And I love the sound
It sooths me
To hear how warm they are
Their voices fill the air
The atmosphere
I love
Her love
The love
I feel
I cant say
I know first hand
Her touch
But it feels to me
Like I have already
Felt it
Her words
So soft
So heart felt
I have no problems
Wanting to love her
To show her
I care
To want her to be without fear
To know that someone is there
For her
And her children
Through thick
Through thin
Healthy
Or
Sick
Her every pleasure
My pleasure
Her every need
My want

Loving her
Begins with
Showing her my love
And letting her decide
To take it
As I wont force her
Push her
Into something shes not ready for
This woman
Is so beautiful
Beyond words that I can say
And for her
I would say anything
If she need hear it
Cause I know her
On the inside
From the little I know of her
My vibe
Is in overdrive
Telling me to show her
Everything
She needs
Wants

She is Kissed by the Sun
And for that
I am unworthy
I cant touch
What she has
I can only offer
What I am
And
I
Am
A
Man
Nothing more
Nothing less
The other part of the equation
Her missing piece
The part of her
That has been missing
That would complete her family
Her children
Im
Not
Saying
I
Would
Replace
A
Father
But only help
A
Mother
A
Woman
A
Possible
Lover
A
Future
Wife

I don’t have all the answers
But I do know myself
And what Im willing to do
For her and hers
And right now
There is nothing more
I would like to do
Then to make
Her
As
Happy
As
I
Can

Showing her that she
CAN
Trust
A
Man

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Date Submitted: Nov 01, 2009 (03:07 PM)
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Date: 11/10/09 (09:55 AM)
Author: Shani. Medicine Woma...
Poem Title: Soul Kiss

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  Advocate
11/05/09 (08:58 PM) 
i must say that i take pleasure in how this created an interesting image and story in my head. i say that because i see this in a couple of different directions. i can see it from a lover's stand point addressing his beloveded. welcoming the ray of life she shines down. the initial thought of a lover's desire to show how deep his admiration is. but creatively just because it seemed open ended towards the opening, i saw a person's love of the world, more specifically the sun. bathing in the embra...
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  Sunkissed25
11/02/09 (12:46 AM) 
ok so ...i couldn't wait to get here to read this!! This was breath taking and i could feel the love in each line.."they beat, she beats, and i love the sound, it soothes me," awwwwwwww love love love this!!

  BrEeZyWrOtE
11/01/09 (04:45 PM) 
ThIs is really beautiful. So sincere as you always are. This poem is so warm and fuzzy. You are so effortless with your words. You have such a lovely gift, please continue to share it. Background fits it perfectly

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