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"Knocked Down"
  by mz_April


Knock You Down feat Kanye West & Ne-Yo - Keri Hilson

years of loneliness,
shower my past.
In and out of relationships,
that never could last.
No one could love me,
I was left incomplete.
I'm the lost peice of the puzzle,
that someone kicked away with their feet.
I looked for love
and found lust.
I gave alll of me
and all I got back was broken trust.
I cried out over blood
and an almost overdose.
Hid my wiah fo death,
from the ones I cared for most.
Love left me to drown,
deep in sorrow.
My soul and heart died
and I was left with no tomorrow.
No hope.
Just loss.
I WAS truly dead.
Waitin for someone to say the time.
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Date Submitted: Jun 10, 2009 (03:54 PM)
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  datboyjada
06/22/09 (07:46 PM) 
very creative wit da wordplay bae. da emotion u poured on dis i just hope dis didnt happen to u for real. keep doing ya thing ma.10

  B. Rose
06/22/09 (02:04 PM) 
Damn this was really deep right here... emptions poured so smooth on this piece April... nice...

  *~Raw Sensuali...
06/19/09 (07:21 AM) 
Damn April... this left me a bit awe struck... inspired something in me... but I have to figure out how I want to word it... this is deep..... those last two lines are what got me....

  big josh
06/14/09 (06:57 PM) 
this was a very emotional piece and the wordplay was very good, nice job :)

  African Queen
06/14/09 (04:55 AM) 
eish been there...and it was so hard to get back up...but i am still here and looking bright. Nice drop

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