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"Laced Hit"
  by Pip


When you get ready to take a hit
You think your gonna feel like your the shit
But if someone gives you a bad one
Your gonna wish the past could be undone

All the memories we made
Refuse to just easily fade
I really wish you would have stayed
But no, now i'm lonley and afraid

The past remains unresolved
The mysteries remain unsolved

I'm still haunted by regret
I am still unable to accept
How you just left me alone
I guess i should have known...

I know at the beginning I was just a replacement
Just someone with whom you could vent
Who ever would have guessed the extent
To which we went...

Sure things were difficult
It really wasn't either of our fault's
Sometimes things just go take a wrong turn and go bad
Its funny how you can forget everything single thing we had

You made me feel like i took a laced hit
Its sad, but I guess i really did deserve it
You didnt hear all the words I needed to say
Couldn't even give me 1 more day, you left without any delay

I know I can make things all right if you granted me one more chance
Despite the distance
I refuse to forget your, OUR existence
Until the day I die I will never stop persisting

You owe me one more chance to talk with you
You would change your mind if you knew what I'm going through
Now every single day I gotta put up a front
All because you had to go and be a fucking cunt!

All the words that are in my head remain unspoken
I'm left on my own and broken

I just wish I could go back in time
To where you were still mine

Its so sick
I'm like an addict
Living for my next fix
My next hit of you

I wish I knew what I was getting into
Before I started "using" you

Now your destroying me bit by bit
And i don't think i can ever quit!
Your just like a laced hit!!
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Date Submitted: Apr 13, 2008 (08:51 PM)
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  touchdapearl2
06/16/08 (11:22 PM) 
GODDAMN THIS HOT! your my favorite poetic now im subscribing to you and everything this was hot man straight off da meter!

  Jayden33
06/16/08 (07:38 PM) 
this was a good ass poem if i had to chose a poem that describes how i feel after i break up with my bf this would be it stay up ma

  :)
06/12/08 (10:49 PM) 
Yeah...I'm thinking a laced hit was a um..Type of hit when you got hit by some boyfriend or something and you ----thought---- it was from loved or something. A frilly laced hit see? No. This was not the opposite but it was the same. "I know I can make things all right if you granted me one more chance Despite the distance I refuse to forget your, OUR existence Until the day I die I will never stop persisting" Ayyy I felt that verse righ there!!! I;ve made so many poems (I don't think I've ...
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  pink passion
06/11/08 (10:53 PM) 
well written

  *Beautiful*
06/10/08 (11:48 AM) 
nice storyline, i like the lil analogy you got goin on. i have a similar poem called addiction. good write.

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